Let your speech be always with grace , seasoned with salt , that ye may know how ye ought to answer every man . - - Colossians 4 : 6
sprinkled salt
enhances flavor
dissipating quick
but does its job
to leave behind a plate to savor and lick
unearths the subtle
tempers the bitter
challenges the bold,
balances out the sweetness
marries flavors to behold
and so our words
we hope to be
truth so sprinkled with salt
unifying . . . spreading peace
but surely not to a fault
all in moderation
for too much salt
can spoil
repulsive to the pallet
burning like a coil
© Copyright 2011 Christine Maxwell
Dare I say it 'flows' really well. A very good read (and a very good write!)
ReplyDeleteNicely done, powerful message held within the depths of grace.
ReplyDeletelovely poem seasoned perfectly.
ReplyDeleteand thanks for you nice comments on my blog.
Your poem is grace-seasoned, as well. I especially like the last two verses. And thanks so much for your kind words over at my place...
ReplyDeletea richness to be enjoyed... all in love and moderation... such a lovely poem!
ReplyDeletethe truth and the dangers of it..words have such power...if only they enhance and not spoil...
ReplyDeleteThank you for your lovely comment regarding my own 'bit o' salt'. Your words are lovely, and so delicately seasoned and grace-filled.
ReplyDeleteYes, our words should be as carefully used as salt.
ReplyDeleteso true and well said! thanks for visiting my blog!
ReplyDeleteNice. Very nice. I love "burning like a coil".
ReplyDeleteThis in itself is a "plate to savor and lick." Lovely poem. Thank you.
ReplyDeletesmart words...
ReplyDeletewell penned.
This poem seems effortless, yet has beat and rhyme and a flow of ideas--and the ideas are worth expressing. That's a lot accomplished!
ReplyDeleteYes, Chris, not enough salt = bland, tasteless; too much = repulsive, unpalatable. We are to let our speech be always with grace, seasoned with salt, that we may know how we ought to answer every men (Colossians 4:6] As Ephesians 4:15 advises us, speak the truth in love. It’s not enough to speak the truth; it’s not enough to speak in love. We are admonished to speak the truth in love. Well spoken, Chris.
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